Tuesday 20 May 2014

Adding detail


Adding detail means our story can answer the questions who, where, when, what how and why. Detail means there will be more information . It makes the story more interesting. It makes a picture in the reader's head. It can be tricky to add detail.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

I like your story. I don't think I've ever seen the ice-sweeper it must have been cool. from Aunty Jacky