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Nice story I like how you use the images to describe the words
Your story is long and involved. Next time focus on capitalisation of words. You have clever words for weapon sounds. like 'ptwang' for the bow and arrow. Great work Anthony!
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Nice story I like how you use the images to describe the words
Your story is long and involved. Next time focus on capitalisation of words. You have clever words for weapon sounds. like 'ptwang' for the bow and arrow. Great work Anthony!
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